The Twisted Truth
Ava Burrows
Wish I'd read the reviews first here. Were this a high school composition it would get a failing even a negative grade. The writer needs a remedial course in English Composition. Nothing less than a total rewrite would save this train wreck, it isn't worth an editor's time. How it rated 5 star ratings is beyond me. Worse yet the file causes Kindle to freeze.
The writing improves dramatically as the story continues. The fact that our dick uses floppy discs and has a computer slot to read them dates that piece. They stopped making them in 2011.
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